Here are some prompts to get you ready for the midterm. Please help each other out if you see an incorrect answer.
1) Simple + action + 3 prep phrases + rice
2) Complex + RP + maple trees
3) Compound + CC + football
4) My shoes are old they are scuffed beyond repair. Fix the run-on 6 ways
5) Complex + SC + fire
6) Simple + linking + 4 prep phrases + tires
7) Compound + TW + hammers
8) Simple + helping + 2 prep phrases + apples
1. I like to eat rice with chopsticks in the sushi bar with my friend.
ReplyDelete2. maple trees have big leaves, which are hard to clean up.
3.football is fun to play, and I like to watch it on television.
4.1-old,and 2-old;therefore, 3-old.They 4-Because they are old,my shoes are scuffed beyond repair. 5-My shoes,which are old,are scuffed beyond repair. 6-?
5.Because the fire was burning the woods, I chose not to go camping.
6.I am changing my tires on the side of the road before they go flat because of a nail.
7.construction workers use different sized hammers;however, I only own a standard size one.
8.I should pick the apples from the tree before they fall to the ground.
Your sentences look good the only thing I would suggest would be for number 4 your 6th way to fix the run on would be a transitional phrase.
DeleteYou seem like you know what your doing! I still get confused also on the six different ways to fix the run ons. Hopefully we can review tonight! :)
Delete- Shannon Hunt
1. After dinner the rice sat in the middle of the table in a bowl.
ReplyDelete2. Maple trees, which are nice to look at are losing their leaves.
3. Football is fun to watch, but playing it is better.
4. 1. old.They
2. old;they
3. old,and
4. old; however
5. my shoes, which are old, are scuffed beyond repair.
6. My shoes are old;in addition, they are scuffed beyond repair.
5. As the fire burned quickly, I made sure I got out of the house fast.
6. In the garage, on top of the cabnet the tires are on display for everyone to see.
7. Hammers are used to put nails into wood;however, I use them for other things.
8. I should have picked the apples in the field during the day.
Good Job Brittney! I’m having difficulties with the “TW” and “CC” I don’t know what they mean.
ReplyDeleteAlejandra
Delete1) My mom cooks rice at night for dinner with the family.
ReplyDelete2) Maple trees, which are hard to maintain.
3) Football is fun to watch, but Cowboys are my favorite.
4) old, old. old; My shoes,which are old,are scuffed beyond repair. Because they are old,my shoes are scuffed beyond repair.
5) As the fire burned, I made sure I didn't enter the woods.
6) During the day in the garage on the truck has four tires that are new.
7) Hammers are harmful; however, I still use them.
8) I should have squeezed the apples to make juice this morning
- Shannon Hunt